瓶中精灵 - Fairy in a Jar

A charming little story full of twists and turns. I wouldn't want to spoil anything, so I'll keep my praise short. I wasn't expecting to get so thoroughly swept-up in the game's narrative, but the next thing I knew a few hours had passed, just like other times when I'd found a good book that I couldn't put down. I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed this story. It sounded like such a simple idea when I read the store page's description, and yet it kept surprising me. Interesting world. Interesting characters. Interesting choices. I recommend it to anyone with an itch for discovery and a free afternoon. This is a great little adventure. Now, TO THE DEVELOPERS/CREATORS of this game, I would just like to mention a couple areas for a few small improvements that could be made for the English translated version: First, the overall translation into English is good, and most of the time the writing flows pretty well. There are a few strange parts where the language used sounds strange, like something from Google Translate instead of something written by a native English speaker. This is not a big issue though, because it all still makes enough sense to be able to follow along, and it's not too often. It's more of a "polishing" sort of suggestion, if that makes sense. Second, the dialogue box tends to cut off some of the words from time to time, which makes me think that the original Chinese characters must have taken up less in-game space than the English words do. This would be a simple fix of just making the English font a little smaller so that it always fits into the window. Again, for any potential players out there, this DOES NOT RUIN the story, as with the help of context clues and the general trajectory of conversations it's easy enough to figure out when it does happen (which isn't too terribly often). And lastly, I'd like to give some personal feedback. I don't know how many other people are like me, but when I first booted up the game, I had a really rough time figuring out how to Start. I clicked it, I tried my gaming controller, and nothing worked. I honestly almost gave up on playing it at all because there was no instruction and nothing I tried did anything. As a last resort, I started pressing keys on my keyboard and eventually stumbled across the Enter button, thank goodness. HOWEVER, it would be my suggestion to please add a little message to the starting page that says something like "click Enter to begin." That would have really helped me out a lot back there, instead of letting me panic. But all things considered, I loved this game; and I look forward to playing another game from you in the future! Thank you and keep up the great work!