Departed Away

Super enjoyable visual novel with good characters and very cute art!!

aşırı sardı ama biraz daha uzun olsa daha iyi olabilirmiş 2 saatte tüm başarımları fulledim

[h1]I wonder when the silksong is coming out... Can't wait to get home and play some games...[/h1] What I like in this VN? The art is very charming, yes the hands are a bit crusty but over all its all pretty great as far as the characters go. What I dislike in this VN? Spoilers ahead, read this review at your own risk. The game simply isn't finished. Even if the author did update it I'm convinced it would still be a let down. That's fine for a 5 dollar visual novel, but I'm going to critique it anyways. [spoiler] I liked the idea, but its been a while since I have played a visual novel that has disappointed me this much. The story centers around a boy, who I named Reader-kun affectionately, his other personality that may or may not exist, some hints at an abusive father, and the struggle of... well... nothing? I liked the idea, but the story goes no where, and half the ""routes"" in double quotes give no context what-so-ever, the ones that do add context to the story do so in a way that actually doesn't help it in any way either. I saw the twist on my first playthrough before I even hit the halfway mark. The routes that do exist are not written well and practically may as well not exist. Marcel stands out, and then suddenly goes no where, and that happens with every single character and event. Nothing happens in this game and when it does happen, you blink and you miss it. Marcel goes no where, Hitomi is a fujoshi that goes no where, the teachers stories go no where, dad goes no where, beatrice, veronica, and ryuji may as well be cartoon characters.[/spoiler] So how would I solve the problem? Well I would simple remake the game. [spoiler] Rewrite the entire game, force the player through the no kill route first without the option of making friends, then at the end with the fight with Lora, you can have the "Good end...?" you're an angel chievo pop but have that actually be the bad end. Have lora take over in some kinda coma reliving the memory moment and then having the kill options available, while expanding on the dad, maybe adding some story at the whole I don't know 2 months in the hospital that was skipped, and then having the coma loop again where we now finally have free range to actually make friends with some of these characters with Lora interfering trying to prove her point in the take over scene that no one likes him and having maybe even one of these characters stand up for him, and then have a final ending based on these things.[/spoiler] I already wishlisted the authors upcoming game, I want to see if they've improved because I believe there is potential, and I want to reward the effort but as it stands Departed Away is a mess, and the fact these character routes end the way they do is at best annoying, and at worst disappointing; maybe even down right infuriating with the lack of agency and choice, when there are no choices where there should have been. so I rate this game a Let me go to the amusement park with Lora out of WTF is Mr. Davis problem teaching kids with dice pfft

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